5th Draft: Everything changed

I could see that through the automatic writing a bigger sense of honesty came through because I wrote about my own perception of the nowadays world. I was curious how Zois wanted me to implement that into my monologue. I did not expect that he wants to make it my monologue. Here is how it went.

Major changes:

• getting rid of the idea of a character

• Using my personal perception and expression of thoughts as my monologue

I kept trying to write from someone elses perspective that shared my thoughts. I thought it was wrong to use myself so much. - What a terrible mistake! I should use what I have, it's art! there's no mistake! Zois told me I was way too intellectual about it and I am very grateful that he brought me to stop thinking about what is right or wrong and just write what came to my head. Of course writing within the guidelines of personal thoughts vs. my place in the society - inspired by Trofimov's behaviour.

#1: Process to the draft

After sending the automatic writing to Zois, he picked some passages and told me to meet him at the Corbett. I should also bring some hardcore techno music. So I went through Spotify and created a playlist. (listen to it here)

He asked me to dance very eccentrically to some of the music and then go into the text. We were both very pleased with the idea and went on from there.

The passages I was using and the structure of moods they implied are the following.

Taking these ideas and the structure away from the first rehearsal was very refreshing. I went and refined the passages into a flowing text.

#2: The Draft